{"id":17970,"date":"2019-08-12T17:20:05","date_gmt":"2019-08-12T22:20:05","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.kaptest.com\/blog\/prep\/?p=17970"},"modified":"2026-10-15T17:48:17","modified_gmt":"2026-10-15T17:48:17","slug":"how-to-write-a-graduate-school-personal-statement","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wpapp.kaptest.com\/study\/gre\/how-to-write-a-graduate-school-personal-statement\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write a Graduate School Personal Statement"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Statement of purpose, personal statement, candidate\u2019s admission statement \u2026 these terms send a shiver down the spine of many prospective graduate students who feel at a loss for how to write about themselves effectively.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">A graduate school personal statement or similar type of application essay, however, is your opportunity to show the admissions committee what you\u2019re made of. They want to know why you\u2019re applying to their graduate program, and the application essay is your chance to communicate that to them as clearly and compellingly as you can.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Applicants should begin with the program\u2019s exact essay instructions. A personal statement may emphasize background, experiences, and motivation, while a statement of purpose may focus more on academic preparation, research interests, and professional goals. Programs may use these labels differently or request both documents. When two essays are required, each should answer its own prompt rather than repeat the same information.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\"><strong>[ GOOD TO KNOW:\u00a0<\/strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kaptest.com\/study\/gre\/how-long-should-i-study-for-the-gre\/\">How long should I study for the GRE?<\/a>\u00a0<strong>]<\/strong><\/p>\n<div  style='height:7px' class='hr hr-invisible   avia-builder-el-0  el_before_av_heading  avia-builder-el-first '><span class='hr-inner ' ><span class='hr-inner-style'><\/span><\/span><\/div>\n<p dir=\"ltr\"><div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h3    avia-builder-el-1  el_after_av_hr  el_before_av_heading  '><h3 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >How do graduate schools use your application essay?<\/h3><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">The graduate school personal statement serves two basic purposes. First, they show whether you know how to write a clear, coherent essay that\u2019s logically and grammatically correct. These days, students\u2019 writing ability is often presumed deficient unless proven otherwise.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Second, the application essay gives you the opportunity to present the admissions committee with more of a \u201cthree-dimensional\u201d perspective of yourself as a deserving candidate than GPA and GRE numbers possibly can.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">What you choose to write sends clear signals about what\u2019s important to you and what your values are. You can explain why you really want to pursue graduate work and outline the career path it will enable you to follow. Your essay also enables you to address things that may warrant explanation, such as a dubious grade in an otherwise creditable record.<\/p>\n<div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h3    avia-builder-el-2  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_heading  '><h3 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >What does the admissions committee look for?<\/h3><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Reading your graduate school personal statement or statement of purpose is the best way for the admissions committee to determine whether you would be a good fit for their program. Remember, they\u2019re trying to get a holistic view of your intellectual character, your ambitions, and your academic skills. So, don\u2019t hesitate to go beyond narrow academic experience when searching for essay topics.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Feel free to discuss events or successes outside of school that have nonetheless helped to define your professional or academic life. If you have overcome significant obstacles, say so. If you were honored with an award, describe the award and what you did to achieve recognition.<\/p>\n<div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h3    avia-builder-el-3  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_heading  '><h3 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >Learn how to write about yourself<\/h3><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Preparation pays off when considering how to write your graduate school personal statement, so start early. Review your goals and aspirations, write several drafts, and talk to students and professors to gain insight about yourself. Then, give some thought to your goals and how to articulate them compellingly in a statement of purpose.<\/p>\n<p>How will you accomplish those goals? What can you contribute to the graduate school community? What can you contribute to this particular degree program? If you can answer these questions in a clear and concise manner, you shouldn\u2019t be at a loss when it comes time to put pen to paper and write your application essay.<\/p>\n<p>Before submitting, applicants can ask a trusted professor or mentor to review the essay for clarity, accuracy, and program fit. For STEM applications, a reviewer familiar with the discipline can help check that descriptions of research and technical interests are precise and understandable.<\/p>\n<div class=\"the-content\">\n<div class=\"ok col-md-5\"><div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h3    avia-builder-el-4  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_heading  '><h3 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >The Most Common Personal Statement Mistake<\/h3><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n<p>Today, we\u2019ll address one of the most common mistakes prospective students make when writing their personal statement: answering the wrong question.<br \/>\n<div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h4  blockquote modern-quote  avia-builder-el-5  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_heading  '><h4 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >The Wrong Question: <span class='special_amp'>\u201c<\/span>Why I Want To Go To Grad School<span class='special_amp'>\u201d<\/span><\/h4><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div><br \/>\nIf you thought the grad school personal statement is actually a \u201cWhy I Want to Go to Grad School\u201d essay, you are not alone. It ranks up there with other false personal statement and application tips like the advice that you should\u00a0leave your recommenders alone. \u00a0Like that unhelpful tip, writing that kind of personal statement can prove detrimental to your grad school application.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Should you explain,\u00a0at some point in your personal statement, why you want to go to grad school? Of course! Grad schools don\u2019t want to admit someone who applies grudgingly, or who only wants to attend because the real world is scary and grad school seems like a good way to pass the time. But is that the primary goal of your essay? Absolutely not.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">\u201cWhy I want to go to grad school\u201d is a fundamentally forward-thinking question. To answer it, you have to talk about what you want to do and who you want to become. You might have promising visions and compelling aspirations, but\u00a0grad schools don\u2019t admit the person you\u2019ll become. They admit the person you are right now. That\u2019s who they want to get to know through this piece of your application.<\/p>\n<div  style='padding-bottom:10px; ' class='av-special-heading av-special-heading-h4  blockquote modern-quote  avia-builder-el-6  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_iconlist  '><h4 class='av-special-heading-tag '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >The Real Question: <span class='special_amp'>\u201c<\/span>Why You Should Accept Me Into Your Program<span class='special_amp'>\u201d<\/span><\/h4><div class='special-heading-border'><div class='special-heading-inner-border' ><\/div><\/div><\/div>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">The question you primarily need to answer is, \u201cWhy should you accept me into your program?\u201d You don\u2019t want your personal statement to sound like a sales pitch, because nobody likes being sold to and grad schools aren\u2019t stupid. But a\u00a0sales pitch is exactly what your personal statement is.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">Grad schools want someone who\u2019s hardworking, competent, and mature, and going on and on about why you want to go to grad school won\u2019t give admissions officers reason to believe you\u2019re any of those things. If anything, an essay devoted entirely to explaining why its author wants to go to grad school runs a risk of making that author seem less mature.<\/p>\n<p dir=\"ltr\">The fundamental question that your essay needs to answer \u2014 \u201cWhy should you accept me into your program?\u201d \u2014 can be broken down into three sub-questions:<\/p>\n<p><div  class='avia-icon-list-container   avia-builder-el-7  el_after_av_heading  el_before_av_sidebar '><ul class='avia-icon-list avia-icon-list-left av-iconlist-big avia_animate_when_almost_visible avia-iconlist-animate'>\n<li><div  class='iconlist_icon  avia-font-entypo-fontello'><span class='iconlist-char ' aria-hidden='true' data-av_icon='\ue816' data-av_iconfont='entypo-fontello'><\/span><\/div><article class=\"article-icon-entry \"  itemscope=\"itemscope\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/BlogPosting\" itemprop=\"blogPost\" ><div class='iconlist_content_wrap'><header class=\"entry-content-header\"><h4 class='av_iconlist_title iconlist_title   '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >Why me?<\/h4><\/header><div class='iconlist_content  '  itemprop=\"text\"  ><p>Applicants should demonstrate their preparation through specific experiences and accomplishments. For STEM applicants, relevant examples might include laboratory work, a research assistantship, a technical project, or an academic achievement. The essay should explain the applicant\u2019s role, what was learned, and how that experience prepared them for graduate study.<\/p>\n<p>For example, strong laboratory grades provide one piece of evidence. Explaining how an applicant refined an experimental procedure, interpreted unexpected results, or helped classmates troubleshoot a problem gives the achievement more context.<\/p>\n<p>The statement should also address what the applicant could contribute to the program. Research experience, technical skills, mentoring, and interdisciplinary collaboration can all provide concrete examples. The goal is to show how past experiences could translate into meaningful participation in the graduate community.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div><footer class=\"entry-footer\"><\/footer><\/article><div class='iconlist-timeline'><\/div><\/li>\n<li><div  class='iconlist_icon  avia-font-entypo-fontello'><span class='iconlist-char ' aria-hidden='true' data-av_icon='\ue816' data-av_iconfont='entypo-fontello'><\/span><\/div><article class=\"article-icon-entry \"  itemscope=\"itemscope\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/BlogPosting\" itemprop=\"blogPost\" ><div class='iconlist_content_wrap'><header class=\"entry-content-header\"><h4 class='av_iconlist_title iconlist_title   '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >Why you?<\/h4><\/header><div class='iconlist_content  '  itemprop=\"text\"  ><p>A strong application explains why the particular program fits the applicant\u2019s interests and goals. General praise for a university\u2019s reputation is less informative than a clear connection to its courses, faculty research, facilities, or collaborative opportunities.<\/p>\n<p>For STEM applicants, this might mean connecting a previous project to a research area within the department or explaining how an interdisciplinary program would support work across two fields. Applicants discussing a faculty member\u2019s research should read enough of that work to describe the connection accurately, rather than simply include a professor\u2019s name.<\/p>\n<p>Where the prompt invites discussion of research interests, applicants can identify a question, emerging trend, or general topic they hope to explore. The discussion should explain why that topic matters and how the program could support further investigation. A detailed research proposal should be included only when requested.<\/p>\n<p>Program resources should also serve a clear purpose in the essay. Instead of listing laboratories, partnerships, or training opportunities, applicants should explain how specific resources would help them develop the skills or knowledge needed for their goals.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div><footer class=\"entry-footer\"><\/footer><\/article><div class='iconlist-timeline'><\/div><\/li>\n<li><div  class='iconlist_icon  avia-font-entypo-fontello'><span class='iconlist-char ' aria-hidden='true' data-av_icon='\ue816' data-av_iconfont='entypo-fontello'><\/span><\/div><article class=\"article-icon-entry \"  itemscope=\"itemscope\" itemtype=\"https:\/\/schema.org\/BlogPosting\" itemprop=\"blogPost\" ><div class='iconlist_content_wrap'><header class=\"entry-content-header\"><h4 class='av_iconlist_title iconlist_title   '  itemprop=\"headline\"  >Why now? <\/h4><\/header><div class='iconlist_content  '  itemprop=\"text\"  ><p>Applicants should explain why graduate study is the appropriate next step at this point in their development. A research project, professional experience, or progression through advanced coursework may have revealed a question they want to investigate or a skill they need to develop.<\/p>\n<p>The explanation should connect preparation with both short-term and long-term goals. For example, an applicant might seek advanced training in a particular research method before pursuing a career in industry or academic research. Describing how the program supports that progression makes the timing and purpose of the application more concrete.<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div><footer class=\"entry-footer\"><\/footer><\/article><div class='iconlist-timeline'><\/div><\/li>\n<\/ul><\/div><br \/>\n<strong>[ NEXT:\u00a0<\/strong><a href=\"https:\/\/www.kaptest.com\/study\/gre\/the-grad-school-application-guide\/\">The GRE Grad School Application Guide<\/a>\u00a0<strong>]<\/strong><br \/>\n<div  class='avia-builder-widget-area clearfix  avia-builder-el-8  el_after_av_iconlist  avia-builder-el-last '><div id=\"text-70\" class=\"widget clearfix widget_text\">\t\t\t<div class=\"textwidget\"><p><span data-sumome-listbuilder-embed-id=\"a78fe19e226d385662749ccaadcdccd7ecdcab651c77e3b874bfcb76a80605a7\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div><div id=\"text-71\" class=\"widget clearfix widget_text\">\t\t\t<div class=\"textwidget\"><p><span data-sumome-listbuilder-embed-id=\"185e834399a9fdd414ded52f3f51a4735f464b8c612f006f44ffba835a649b4f\"><\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n\t\t<\/div><\/div><\/p>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Statement of purpose, personal statement, candidate\u2019s admission statement \u2026 these terms send a shiver down the spine of many prospective graduate students who feel at a loss for how to write about themselves effectively. 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